{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"51809044","dateCreated":"1331924273","smartDate":"Mar 16, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"btlove1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/btlove1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/english10improvingwriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/51809044"},"dateDigested":1532144050,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Reflection","description":"Was this re-write useful? Do you feel as though the feedback you received on the paragraph was sufficient? Do you think you made the necessary changes to increase the quality of the paragraph?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"51903740","body":"Yes I think the re-write was useful . It helped a lot I feel as though the feedback was sufficient when it came to re writing . I made the necessary changes to increase the quality of the paragraph .","dateCreated":"1332208022","smartDate":"Mar 19, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"keyara7596","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/keyara7596","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51915610","body":"Yes this re-write was really helpful in making my revising skills more accurate.","dateCreated":"1332248131","smartDate":"Mar 20, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"edwardM3","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/edwardM3","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51987768","body":"But wait! Neither of you POSTED your re-write on the page. I need this!","dateCreated":"1332366953","smartDate":"Mar 21, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"btlove1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/btlove1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52065004","body":"I think E.M needs to check over it becuase it was alot of lack of supportting details. When ready it was a lot of confusn. On a better note you did well of comparing and contrasting the paragraph.","dateCreated":"1332510518","smartDate":"Mar 23, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"lexylex","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/lexylex","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52065006","body":"I think E.M needs to check over it becuase it was alot of lack of supportting details. When ready it was a lot of confusn. On a better note you did well of comparing and contrasting the paragraph.","dateCreated":"1332510521","smartDate":"Mar 23, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"lexylex","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/lexylex","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52139508","body":"I dont have a re-write","dateCreated":"1332735591","smartDate":"Mar 25, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"keyara7596","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/keyara7596","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"51809020","dateCreated":"1331924218","smartDate":"Mar 16, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"btlove1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/btlove1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/english10improvingwriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/51809020"},"dateDigested":1532144050,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Feedback","description":"Select ONE revised paragraph. Offer this paragraph feedback based on content, organization, and grammar usage and mechanics. Is it a good paragraph? How can it be improved. Be sure to specify which paragraph you chose!","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}