{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"51989570","dateCreated":"1332370240","smartDate":"Mar 21, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Timmy46","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Timmy46","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/english10improvingwriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/51989570"},"dateDigested":1532144052,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Revise","description":"when I revise I like to do it in parts. If ita a paper I will do it by separating the paragraphs. But the good thing about this is some time I make the same mistake so when I already see that I made that mistake, it's easier to fix","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"52022138","body":"Revising can come in handy when it comes to writing . Timmy46 should have revised before he made his post on revising. Besides that, revising makes the reader feel as though you took time to write what you wrote and you didnt rush or you know what your talking about. If to many mistakes are being made it can most deffinately throw the reader off.","dateCreated":"1332433255","smartDate":"Mar 22, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"keyara7596","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/keyara7596","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]},{"id":"51808442","dateCreated":"1331923531","smartDate":"Mar 16, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"btlove1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/btlove1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/english10improvingwriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/51808442"},"dateDigested":1532144052,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Revising","description":"Activity: In the discussion area, write what YOU do when you revise. What parts of the revision process are easy or difficult? What can you do to improve your revision skills?","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"51824050","body":"During the rrevising proccess you are basically proofreading what a person is trying to say in their essay by summarizing it. The person might have different reasons for writing it's up to you to figure it out.","dateCreated":"1331997406","smartDate":"Mar 17, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"brandonwithAbeard","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/brandonwithAbeard","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51893516","body":"I agree with brandonwithAbeard  revising is simple all you do proofread, ON the other hand you need to make correction as well, for it to sound better. Also as a reader I need to make sure what the author is trying to convey to me or the author  point about their topic of writing.","dateCreated":"1332192155","smartDate":"Mar 19, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"lexylex","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/lexylex","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51912948","body":"Revising is fairly easy for the most part, but ther are times where it can get difficult. But all you have to do is go back and double check that persons work to make sure they are using all the correct tense words.","dateCreated":"1332244023","smartDate":"Mar 20, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"edwardM3","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/edwardM3","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51985038","body":"I Agree with Edward, revising your papers can be is, but you have to make sure you dont have any run-on sentences and your grammar is correct.","dateCreated":"1332362762","smartDate":"Mar 21, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Emory-Stafford","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Emory-Stafford","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51985202","body":"When I revise I only re-read and write a draft. But at times finding the mistakes are hard and not knowing what you are underlining. But, I do agree with lexylex that as a reader you need to make sure what the author is trying to convey or the point about their topic of writing.","dateCreated":"1332362996","smartDate":"Mar 21, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Z.G.","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Z.G.","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51987736","body":"Hey guys! Overall, you all are making me proud because you are demonstrating a lot of what we have discussed in class. I know that the revision process can be difficult, but it is integral. When you are writing and you are the only person revising, things can become tricky. Sometimes your brain will skip over errors that you made because you made them. You should always try to get a &quot;clean&quot; set of eyes to double check what you've done! <br \/>\n<br \/>\nAny thoughts?","dateCreated":"1332366903","smartDate":"Mar 21, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"btlove1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/btlove1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52063316","body":"When i revise I  re-read over the information and make sure everything flows. Revising my own work can be diffucult, because I know what im trying to say. Re-vising for others is fairly easy. I agree with lexylex.","dateCreated":"1332508743","smartDate":"Mar 23, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Daizjaa","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Daizjaa","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52090980","body":"i agree with lexylex. Also, when you are revising a paper you need to make sure the writer stays on topic, there are no run-on sentence, and they give enough supporting detail from the text.","dateCreated":"1332548285","smartDate":"Mar 23, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Cassidy-Caton","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Cassidy-Caton","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52139482","body":"When revisig, I make sure I proofread. If I dont , Then My Swntence wont make any sense and my reader wont understand what Im talking about.","dateCreated":"1332735450","smartDate":"Mar 25, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"keyara7596","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/keyara7596","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52139498","body":"Revising*","dateCreated":"1332735509","smartDate":"Mar 25, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"keyara7596","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/keyara7596","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}