{"content":{"sharePage":{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"50941172","dateCreated":"1330292667","smartDate":"Feb 26, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"btlove1","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/btlove1","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"},"monitored":false,"locked":false,"links":{"self":"https:\/\/english10improvingwriting.wikispaces.com\/share\/view\/50941172"},"dateDigested":1532144061,"startDate":null,"sharedType":"discussion","title":"Offer Feedback","description":"Use this area to offer feedback, by referencing specific lines. Then, respond to a classmate about the feedback he\/she provided.","replyPages":[{"page":0,"digests":[{"id":"51000242","body":"The good thing about this paragraph is that there was no important details left out and it was explained thoroughly.","dateCreated":"1330396646","smartDate":"Feb 27, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"brandonwithAbeard","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/brandonwithAbeard","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51067324","body":"This paragraph was very detailed. But, it did not have a conclusion to close the paragraph. It didn\u2019t include the authors of both stories. But, other than that its well written.","dateCreated":"1330484820","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Z.G.","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Z.G.","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51067370","body":"I agree with brandonwithAbeard's feedback because it was explained thoroughly.","dateCreated":"1330484877","smartDate":"Feb 28, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Z.G.","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Z.G.","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51097494","body":"This paragraph was explained very well, also i agree with Z.G. this paragraph was very detailed. but the ending just left me hanging it was not a strong closure.","dateCreated":"1330535250","smartDate":"Feb 29, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"edwardM3","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/edwardM3","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51388232","body":"this paragraph explained the text and didn't leave any important details out. I agree with ZG it didn't include both author from each story","dateCreated":"1331092470","smartDate":"Mar 6, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"randy.thomas","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/randy.thomas","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51903336","body":"This was a good paragraph . Very well detailed and explained many things through it . I thought it would have been some mistakes, but it was very good .","dateCreated":"1332207354","smartDate":"Mar 19, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"keyara7596","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/keyara7596","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"51985232","body":"In that paragraph, it was very well detailed, nothing was missing, all of the main problems were in that paragraph and was explained good.","dateCreated":"1332363057","smartDate":"Mar 21, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Emory-Stafford","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Emory-Stafford","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52041812","body":"In this paragraph there was no introduction and there was no conclusion, but the paragraph had great detail.","dateCreated":"1332456876","smartDate":"Mar 22, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Cassidy-Caton","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Cassidy-Caton","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52047430","body":"While reading the paragraph I didn't see an introduction or a conclusion. Other than i thought it was very well detailed","dateCreated":"1332465210","smartDate":"Mar 22, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"Daizjaa","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/Daizjaa","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}},{"id":"52062682","body":"When I read the paragraph I realize that this person didnt provide enought support from the texts to rensure that what the author is trying to say is actual factual.","dateCreated":"1332507959","smartDate":"Mar 23, 2012","userCreated":{"username":"lexylex","url":"https:\/\/www.wikispaces.com\/user\/view\/lexylex","imageUrl":"https:\/\/ssl.wikicdn.com\/i\/user_none_lg.jpg"}}],"more":0}]}],"more":false},"comments":[]},"http":{"code":200,"status":"OK"},"redirectUrl":null,"javascript":null,"notices":{"warning":[],"error":[],"info":[],"success":[]}}