8.+Revising+Our+Own+Writing

Directions:

1. Go back to OUR OWN WRITING II to the discussion area. Locate the feedback two classmates are offering you. Decide which feedback to use. Then, revise your paragraph. Paste your paragraph below, or e-mail it to me if you cannot get it to work. Under your new paragraph, tell what changes you made from the rough draft.

2. Then, go to the discussion area, and write about whether the feedback you received was beneficial or not.