2.+What+Feedback+Looks+Like

==== **Directions:** Below is a paragraph written by a student on [|www.usingenglish.com]. Read the paragraph. Then, think about what changes you would suggest that this person make to his/her paragraph. Then, scroll down for sample feedback. In the discussion area, respond to the questions about peer feedback. Please also respond to ONE classmate. ====


 * Step 1:**

Title: Do fat people have heightened smell sensitivity of food?

You would think that heavy people would have a heightened smell sensitivity than those who are not. Also you would think this might be the reason why fat people are likely to get weight in a faster speed (than those who are not fat). However, a recent work has revealed that it is not true. Regardless of how much they are heavy, the work shows people of being hungry have a tendency to have a better smell sensitivity to non-food, not food even before eating any meal. Interestingly, after eating meals heavy people are more likely to prefer food scenes than non-food scenes. Researchers believe this might drive the heavy people to not put down their forks and knifes, and tuck food in.


 * Step 2:**

Below, you will find the same paragraph with peer feedback included. // Be sure to scroll ALL the way to the bottom for **Step 3!** //  media type="custom" key="12560692" width="60" height="60"


 * Step 3:**

Go to the discussion area and respond to the questions. Also, please respond to ONE classmate.